bright gossamer wings
moonlight dancing,hidden rings
lovely fairy things
Ummm trying Haiku again lol.......:)
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Written September 5th, 2002
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This is such a beautiful Haiku well this is so beautiful keep the good work up. Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read. Thanks again.
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this is wonderful! I bookmarked it -- I love the art so much -- I might be tempted to write a poem sometime with it. Thank you!
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magical mystical cute and shiny
makes me want to listen to "dance of the sugarplum fairy"
and the image adds to the sweetness
this has a tiny bell inside of it
peace
justine -
This rhymed beautifull! I love faeries so this one definitely caught my eye! Once again you have impressed me!
Beautiful write!
Kayla -
Excellent
Hi Susan:
An absolutely beautiful Haiku. I really like this piece. Thank you for posting this wonderful write. Bill -
Aww, that was such a sweet Haiku, I loved it! I love the picture aswell. Great write Xx
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eek!! I LOVED this haiku!!
very beautiful. admittedly I liked it just cos it was about one of my favourite things (I luv faeries!!), but was a magical write.
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BEAUTIFULLY DONE. Very rare that someone can take a haiku and actually make then end rhyme as well withouth making the poem choppy or nonsensical. A truly inspiring write of such beautiful fantasy (hehe...FAERIES ROCK). Love ya girlie. Hugz. Hope things get better for ya.
Your PPF Queen...:P Sonia -
i have no idea what this was about but rock on with ya bad self because a lot of other people got it PEACE bryan
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excellent
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Like this its lovely, shame about the pic, but i lost most of mine too, though like you most of my poems don't need the pic, but some were written for the pic and are now pointless...
Barbsxx -
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its very cute. it reminds me of little girls. :) great job. -
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Unusual to have rhyme in a haiku. It's pretty neat the way you did it................. great image.
Monk -
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Successful attempt here I say! You produced a beautiful image within the strictures of the form. Now, if I could only do that..... -
excellent
The last person that said something like 'Haiku!' to me I shot. Wish I could understand it and try it - someday maybe.
Whatever, Blushy, this is very, very nice.
Sag -
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this is so beautiful.....i have not grasped the haiku thing, you did it well. lovely picture as well. ~Amy~ -
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a wonderful haiku . and i love the picture . very cute . please come and read my haikus .
thanx so much for sharing .
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Really nicely worded and a really cute feel. Success haiku magic -tj- -
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lovely. nice pic.
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Nam -
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I tried haiku...once..probably won't again LOL I really like this tho.. wonderfully done...love the little fairy too :) -
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awwwwwwwwwww.nice...I pinched the piccie Sis.. cute..Beth will love it!!! ~~~GILL~~~ -
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I think it's cute! I like it... :)
-Kristen-
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