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Drift in Sweet Slumber

Look at her…you can almost drink the passion from her lips, feel her velvety soft skin under your fingertips

So very long you have dreamed, and there she stands, your desires replace all that is rational, she is the missing piece of your existence

Knowing with every fiber of your being the dream is yours, pains of the emotional past cautions the lust of your very soul, take heed my friend while throwing caution to the wind, your emotions can be dangerous and will wound an innocent heart when dreams knock at your door

Approach her with compassion in your eyes, let her see the depth inside of you that she may help to heal your past and make anew the life deserved and lay before you

Call her with a wanton voice, it will sound as loud as ten thousand French horns and carry as far as the east is from the west, she will not help but to run in the direction from whence it comes, destiny will pave the way

Touch her as if she were a fragile flower, caress her inner self as gentle as the autumn breeze encourages the fallen leaves to dance amidst the sweet aroma on a moonlit night, brush her hair from her barren shoulders and follow the contour of her archened back

Lay her down gently; indulge, connecting from love to love

Listen to her cries and moans for you have orchestrated this harmonious experience, the power is yours for she is vulnerable and aching to be touched

Drink wine from her breasts, your fiery kisses across her moist body will burn in her memory for days to come

Read her body language, it will be easy to predict her desires

Let her feel your breath on her cheek as the pain in the pit of your passions swell to newborn heights, experiencing as one what it must be like to be in heaven

Whisper of the sweetness as you taste the smile from a glorious after glow she wears, illuminating light in the darkness

Thank her for sharing the sacred above all sacred, worship her freely, she is a gift to you from God, she already worships you, hold her tight, yet kind and gentle, until she drifts in sweet slumber

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  • rggiggles
    January 28, 2005
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    Thanks. I was thinking about a past relationship and what I thought it "should" have been like. I have that now (proud to say). I was inspired by a fellow poet in VA.


  • Windworder gold member
    January 28, 2005
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    A manual for lovemaking, interesting approach. To a man from the woman's point of view. Very creative indeed.

  • wbluerose02
    January 28, 2005
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    Bravo

    WOWWWWWWWWWW this is amazing piece of work,I like it alot. suck strong words within your heart and soul. I give this Two Thumbs Up on this fine write. Keep up the awesome writing and thank you for sharing this with my family and I.