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An Angel's Kiss

Your birthday's coming up
And for you this is my wish
That on January twenty-first
You feel an angel's kiss

A kiss that's oh so gentle
Given on your cheek
It will make you feel so strong
Whenever you feel weak

This kiss is also special
For it will last the whole year through
It will bring you health and happiness
And this I wish for you

Through trials and tribulations
This kiss will see you through
An angel's kiss is specially reserved
For people just like you

A person who shows love
And has a heart that cares
And when other folks have trouble
They know he's always there

So Bud on your birthday
When you feel that gentle kiss
Remember, that from across the miles
For you I made this wish

HAVE A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY, MY FRIEND

LOVE
BERTIE

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Written January 14th, 2005

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  • angelica silver member
    January 25, 2005
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    Congratulations bertie on your Gold Trophy Love Joan


  • budlem
    January 14, 2005
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    (((( Bertie )))) my almost cousin-in-Law (ha ha), I am so happy to have you as a friend. I am so happy to have you in my life as a friend. You are a joy and a pleasure to chat with and touch spirit with. Thank you so very much. I may have felt an Angel's kiss.....for I have been kissed by many Angels here.


  • Nelak
    January 14, 2005
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    So beautifully written, Bertie. :)

    Bertie,

    Ohhhh, was this ever beautiful! Your words come straight from your heart and can be felt miles away. It is amazing how far we have come from the first time we set foot to AP 'til now. The bonds that have been made. You are so precious and special to me. Remember to smile, Bertie. Love you lots.

    With lots of love,

    ~ Kalen