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a thank you to my favorite band

Your music means a lot to me,
It makes me feel free
When I’m trapped in a cage
Nowhere to go
Doors locked
Lights off
I feel like my heads gonna explode
But then I press play
Your songs make my day
I feel like I can breathe
Taking one more step upon the asphalt
Without a delay

Rays of the sun exploding onto
My flesh like a newly loaded gun
But without the sound or blood
It penetrates my pores
I can feel it inside of me
Inspiring me to the core
I’ve never felt this secure before
While my feet hit the ground
Dancing to the tune
And my voice sings along
To the lyrics of your song

My spirit is lifted
I finally know what
It’s like to be alive again,
I’m glad I didn’t give in
To my insecure thoughts
Your music has pulled me through this,
Thank you for saving my life
When I was so distressed.

Author notes

i sent it to them in email as well
Written January 14th, 2005

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  • LaughingPanther
    January 14, 2005
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    Love it

    Wow musicians would love to hear this..........I have alot of musicians that touch me this way to and help me make it through the day.


  • IronButterfly
    January 14, 2005
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    A great write and a wonderful way to say thank you. I don't know who you wrote this to speciffically but i can think of a few bands or musicians i'd send it to. Thanx for sharing. keep it up.