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You said you're road was lonely,

You said you're road was lonely,

        So i asked

"What do you know?"

               . . . . She said "Its all relative"

. . .then theres the She. . .the one. . .

             To beautiful. . . .


     You think that you're road is lonely?

            You have the stars. . .

  You dont know how Fucking lucky you are.

              they'll take you home.

    I cried for those stars. . . .

             But they wont come out to play no more.

And im glad you have them.

                 With no starlight,

        I cant see the cuts through my feet,
           
       
 You say your lonely road?. . .but you have such beauty.

                 You only walk that road.

Because you dont know any other road.

Because you dont like maps. . .you cant read signposts.


     So you sit on her bed,

        While the stars shine with you.

Kiss her,
Touch her,
Hold her,
"Love" her,
Fuck her.

           And I'll stand out here with the clouds. . .

. . .Because i know pain,
                   and i know how to be lonely.


        But i can read.

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I'm so fucking sorry
Written January 14th, 2005

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  • David Trapp
    January 20, 2005
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    this is really moving... ur quite the poet


  • CaliforniaGril
    January 18, 2005
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    WOW! I am breathless. You caught me by surprised with these words. I miss reading them and I miss talking with you. I love this poem and I can feel tears streaming my cheeks. This is so beautiful and so lonely that I can't quite speak.
    <3 Erin


  • x-psycho-x
    January 17, 2005
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    i love this. well done elle. also, its so true lol, no matter how alone you are, you always have the stars lol xXx


  • funeral
    January 15, 2005
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    Because you dont like maps. . .you cant read signposts.


    wow this is amazing really reminds me of how people pretend to be so "depressed" and they never think of the people who actaully are! this is fukcing great keep it up!

  • FadingAway
    January 14, 2005
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    awesome

    This write is awesome, i can relate to it, if you ever need anyone im always here. And i look forward to reading more of your work.

    ~Suicide Ways~

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