I re-emerge with mended wings
No longer affected by insignificant things
Nestled in the peace of a sound mind
Mapping out my life’s new design
Walking along wisdom’s beach
Realizing everything is within my reach
Reaching for my heart’s desire without fear
Opening up my heart and being sincere
Sitting alone in serenity’s embrace
Reflecting on how I arrived at this place
Mended wings once tattered by life
Ready to soar and take flight
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Written January 14th, 2005
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Awesome!
This is so very lovely and I congratulate you on your mended wings!Blessings to you always!Don't worry!Be happy! -
this is so beautiful...it gives a wonderful message of hope and light it was written with grace and flows nicely, great job!
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A message of hope and inspiration - the pastures treasures clearly glowing from your soul.
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This flowed so well. I love the background, it is adorable and fits so well with the poem.
~Sam~
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I love your name! -
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Oh wow! This is really great! Everything flows so well and it's so up lifting and peaceful. Great Job, keep it up! -
beautiful!
Butterflys are my favorite - so you sure brought a smile to my face with this one....beautiful in every way! as is the poem. Thanks for sharing!! -
Thanks for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment. Love does heal wounds as does time and patience. The new name and title of the poem are reflective of accomplishments from then to now.
Be blessed
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Thanks Av!!!! I really felt like a lot of life;s situations prevented me from being able to express myself lately. I felt like a wounded bird so to speak, but now all these words are pouring out of me and...well it feels good and I'm glad you and enjoyed it and the butterflies are rather peaceful arent they?
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Excellent
I see now my dear fellow poet why you changed your name to the same as this title. Tastefully done penning the emotions of how we go through life with trials & tribulations which leaves us tattered sometimes..yet love is a healing source to all pains.
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not only is the background pretty but so is the poem
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I am so glad that you have broken through your chrysalis and 'emerged' from the shell that depression has held you in for so long. I also think that this would work wonderfully as a song--but I would like it either way. This is definitely going in my AP scrapbook. (You didn't know I was collecting the works of my friends, did you?) I think that the butterflies in the background work perfectly, and it is my wish that you soar without ever again having to worry about whether your wings will fail you.
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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Mended Perfectly!
WOW Dee! Those "Mended Wings" sure do bring out the best in you. I am practically speechless at this write. It is FANTASTIC and the butterflies adds a beautiful fluttering effect. Your poem rocks and HeavenSnt268 is right, it would be perfect as a song. Make sure those wings are never broken again. Fly on my fine feathered friend, FLY ON!. Avril
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Great poem. It would be perfect as a song. Keep up the good work.
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