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home isnt home without you here

I dreamed that you came home last night,
It made me sad it wasnt real,
It made me wonder if your really coming back,
My best friend thats what you are,
But what if im not yours?
What if this ISNT your home anymore?
What if its just mine?
But it isnt now, no its not,
Home isnt home without you here.

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i misses you ashley
Written January 14th, 2005

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  • ill always love you
    March 15, 2006
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    oh yea and you dont have to worrie about you not being my bestestestestestest friend because you always will be NO MATTER WHAT!!! i love you!!!

  • ill always love you
    March 15, 2006
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    Hey girly! i miss you too! i know you wrote this along time ago! but hey atleast you dont have to put up with alex talking about chelsea anymore! i miss you soooo much! thanks for calling me last night!! i'm gunna hurt spenser for not telling you! lol well i'm at school right now so i gotta go !!! love ya hun!!!

    Love always
    ~*~Ashley~*~


  • The cuteness
    January 22, 2005
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    ya, alex makes it worse talking about how he loves her friend chelsea all the time


  • Mad Poetess
    January 15, 2005
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    Aww, I'm sorry you miss her sweetie. I have dreams like that sometimes and then am sad they aren't real. Great poem though! I really liked it.
    Sexy Sadie

  • pruedence
    January 14, 2005
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    Very sad...love gone wrong...time may heal...thanks for sharing

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