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Its YOUR Life

what do you really want to do?
think about when and where and who.
think about it.
now put everything you have into it.
turn your entire life bit by bit,
in to something.
drop everything that gets in the way.
this is YOUR life.
for a moment don't think of anyone else,
don't think of what might get in the way.
you might appear to have everything,
but if its not what you want,
its nothing.
go for it!

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Written January 14th, 2005

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  • Caiwena
    January 15, 2005
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    he he. Good advice, and cool poem


  • little-hug
    January 14, 2005
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    I like this poem. It is inspirational. very cool.
    ellie

  • mImIGuRl2006
    January 14, 2005
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    Wonderful

    Your poem is really nice and i really like how you set the scene in the beginning. I like the thought of things bieng about me for a chance very inspriational keep writing good poems.