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The Power Of Women

you
with your 'ideal' cultural structure
your born perfect life
nothing to work on
you
rapped up in 'society'
life for you is cozy
you have nothing to challenge.

she
she is who is responsible for the world you wallow in
this place you've splashed your way through
this life that you've messed up
she
she is the hero nobody sees
behind the hidden scenes
but she is there
she
she has progressed your primitive mind
and amazingly learnt to fly
even though you crush her.

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Written January 14th, 2005

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