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I Am Darkness

Swimming through your veins
Down to your core
My deadly love corrupting
Your purified soul

A poisoned heart
A love in the dark

I am the spirit of you
I am your only existence

A morbid lust
As drops of crimson
Into the dust

I live through you
I am you

A poisoned heart
A love in the dark

I am the spirit
Of you
On you
Inside you
I am your only existence
I am Darkness

Author notes

From "Black Star" by Peccatum.
Written January 13th, 2005

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  • DeadlyPoetic88
    February 5, 2005
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    Your poetry is really powerful I like it a lot. Keep up the awesome job! You write things that I wish I were able to write. Keep up the aswesome job again. YOu're words are moving.


  • Alahmorah
    January 15, 2005
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    That is wonderful. I have never heard of Peccatum before, but I will check them out. Great job. Best of Luck in the contest, my friend
    Love, Ashlee