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Nature of Love

Sunlight, warm and golden, flitting through tall oak trees
Clear rushing water breaking over limestone bluffs
Emerald grass against clear blue sky
A gentle breeze lifts the leaves, yet ignored
One lone focal point of heat, of completion
Clasped for solitude in the breaking light of day
Flame and purity and earth and soul
A whirlwind and silence all at once
Stretching off into the dark of eternity
Nothing matters--
Nothing matters--
Save for the waking world of broken dreams

Author notes

Well, then...thank Michelle for writing a wonderful poem that inspired me to go write. Other than that, this is mostly a personal piece, hence I'm not going to go overly into it...feel free to interpret however you like ^_^;
Written January 13th, 2005

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  • moonlitclover
    January 13, 2005
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    hmm...not really sure how to interpret this one...i love the description in it though. it makes me want summer to be here REALLY badly--damn you! ha, just kidding, you know i love ya! "a whirlwind and silence all at once"--that's really pretty, too. hmm...this is a fun one to read over and over and just kinda let your thoughts slide elsewhere, you know? and maybe that's how i interpret it...who knows. either way, it's still fabulous and you are still (and always will be) one of my favorite writers...but maybe i'm just biased...;-)
    ---michelle