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Ridiculous Rhymes 36(Fantasy)

The Unicorn has a horn,but you would not know it
For as hard as he trys,he cannot blow it.

Thunder god Thor surely did roar
Hit his thumb with hammer,boy was it sore.

Cupid shot his arrow at my heart
Bad aim,pierced my sitting part.

Mounted Pegasus but on could not stay
Those flapping wings blew me away.

The flaming Dragon did sulk and pout
A noble knight put his fire out.

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Written January 13th, 2005

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  • misterfish
    June 28
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    Thats good! Really good. Hmmm...Prelims for you


  • Tweedle Dum
    May 6, 2006
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    Amusing

    That was very clever and amusing. Though I kind of feel bad for that poor dragon *tear, Now how will he ever burn that knights booty? Hmm...i might let him borrow a few matches. Oh well GReat poem!


  • bakacoconut
    May 5, 2006
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    Wonderful rhyme scheme, and I loved the fact that it's about fantasy creatures. Great work and best of luck to you in the contest

    Coconut


  • Silent Lie
    March 25, 2006
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    haha, another good one
    thanks for entering and good luck


  • PurpleSky
    January 20, 2005
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    o.k the first one gave me a chuckle im ashamed to say LOL but the rest made me smile. thanks for entering and good luck
    love and hugs
    ~Lena~


  • masterblaster gold member
    January 15, 2005
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    A very charming poem that brought a smile, well thought out. good luck in comp.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 13, 2005
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    smiling~

    It did have that sing song feel too it
    Differen and Unique
    Good luck in the contest and nice to meet ya
    Susan~~~


  • iamfromabove
    January 13, 2005
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    Very cute loved your references Good luck in the comp

  • MissSecret
    January 13, 2005
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    I just sang this.. lol its a wonderful SONG.


  • January 13, 2005
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    Very amusing my poet friend you made a hilarious vision! Thank you for entering our contest, and best of luck Ann

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