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Maybe someday

Maybe someday you'll hold me tenderly in your arms again, or tell me you love me and mean it with all your heart.  Maybe someday you can hold my hand in yours, squeezing it tightly and thinking back, wondering how you could have ever left me.  Maybe someday you'll stare into my eyes again, making sure everyone knows that I'm with you.  Maybe someday you'll tell me I'm beautiful, as your fingers trace every line along my face.  Maybe someday I'll feel you pick me up in your arms and carry me away, Maybe someday we can just run....somewhere, just us, together.
                ....Maybe Someday....

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Written December 15th, 2005

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  • kntryg
    March 20, 2005
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    rksweetpunk,
    You do have a way with words I love it and if u don't mind I am adding u to my favorites...kntryg

  • romeomustdie
    January 13, 2005
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    that is deep and don't put your hopes down because there is really someone out there for everyone that is a keeper, trust me, nice write and good luck in the future