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Devil's Dance

The music flowed
Across the graves
Through many shadows
Into the cave.
“Come dance with me,”
the Devil said
and I complied
and with the dead
I danced.
And with the dead I danced.

I kicked my heels
Into the air
And so I danced
Without a care.
The dead, they laughed
And the Devil sang
And through the night
Our revelry rang.
And through the night our revelry rang.

Soon and sooner
The dawn approached
And I was still
By night encroached.
The Devil came
And invited me
To return to Hades
And forever be
By his side.
And forever be by his side.

So with the ghouls
And ghosts I fled
And waved goodbye
To the dead.
The Devil and I
We danced along
And heard the dying
Strains of song.
And heard the dying strains of song.

Author notes

OH CRAP! I've finally posted something. after you've recovered from the shock, feel free to drop a line. i'm feeling a bit rusty and would appreciate it. oh, and in case anyone was interested...1 week and im fucking 16. finally.
Written January 12th, 2005

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  • Queen of Wicka
    January 11, 2006
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    bravo


  • Skawe
    July 1, 2005
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    This was great. very morbid indeed.
    Now planted in my mind, a seed.
    I loved the repeating at the end of the part
    But to think of this only ices my heart.


  • Falling Grace
    May 16, 2005
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    I like this alot i like the way it is so different to other poems i have read this is so cool


  • blaze101
    March 20, 2005
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    it's been a long time. you've done it agen another wonderfull poem.i think i'm in love. (with your work that is)

  • StrawberiFaerie
    January 20, 2005
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    hey Em!! another amazing one, its good to see you writing again. i truly enjoyed this, the rhyming was awesome and i loved how you repeated the last few lines in each stanza..keep it up and happy belated birthday!! ~Amy~


  • Padfoot-Black
    January 20, 2005
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    This is GREAT! Go you!


  • OneMorePeacefulDay
    January 12, 2005
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    I like this...A lot, really. Don't see many well done fantasy poems.

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