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i promise

impale my heart

i hope to die

stick a dagger in my eye

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it's extremely short, and a lot of people have probably had the same idea to do this but i was bored and had no use for it elsewhere.
Written January 12th, 2005

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  • YourMomWritesPoetry
    January 12, 2005
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    Hmm...interesting, very interesting. Short and very open, but good job. Great write and keep it up.
    ~Frankee