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Superstar

Superstar

As a karaoke singer
He’s a real humdinger
All out of rhythm and tune
But he tries his best
To include the rest
To get involved in what he’s doing.

His acting’s good
And he knows he could
Wrap me round his little finger
He looks and smiles
Knowing all the while
He just aint no karaoke singer!

He has a mic’ in his hand
And he’s feeling mighty grand
As he swaggers up and down
He’s the rootinist, tootinest,
Totally high falutingest
Bestest karaoke singer in town!

But, as a karaoke singer
He’s a real humdinger
Never in rhythm or tune
But he does his best
And includes the rest
And we do enjoy what he’s doing.

© ali-p 2005

Author notes

my grandson (3 years old) was singing to us his latest rockabilly favourite - ("You're a Humdinger" / BR549's) and I was inspired to share his enthusiasm with you all in here.
Written January 12th, 2005

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  • K1r5ty
    June 4, 2006
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    i liked it reminds me of my nites out! hehe well odne


  • March 24, 2005
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    Fun and pleasing to read

    Very catchy. You can almost see his face while reading!


  • QueenT
    March 23, 2005
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    nice poem well done
    thats all


  • yumanbeing
    January 12, 2005
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    Only three - hold on to your hat partner - your in for a long ride - but enjoyable for the most part I am sure -