You are such an awesome man,
a silver tongued devil.
Romancing us with your words,
on a gentleman level.
Sonnets, sing out from your soul,
serenading all the senses.
Causing our heads to swoon,
letting down our defenses.
On your birthday I give to you,
simple words from my heart.
Thanking you for being there,
with the kind words you impart.
May you be blessed with many friends,
who are as wonderful as you.
Caring and loving friends,
that are honest and true.
Author notes
....hope you have a delicious birthday!!!
Written January 12th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday Hugh Wyles! by Mari Goes.
350 points, ended January 12, 2005, 15 entries
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Wow, great background for this piece, I do not know this guy but I can bet he LOVED this! Who wouldn't? Great job on this piece, heartfelt and meaningful. Loved it! -
Fantastic Poem!
What a brilliant display of true love and friendship for a fellow poet. The graphics are spectacular, the words so genuine and true but best of all the birthday cake looks simply delicious. Hope Hugh had a wonderful and memorable birthday.
Avril
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Aawwww Sam!
~~~
I may sometimes be quite a devil
and yet, you know, I'm on the level.
Meeting and parting on the square
with all mankind 'most anywhere.
I would not harm the smallest fly
or cause one of God's beings to die.
The one thing I would like to take -
a HUGE slice of your birthday cake.
My doctor tells me "NO - by golly!!
Youve got to watch cholesterolly!"
But dang the doctor! I'll just pray
for God's forgiveness on this day.
I'll eat my fill and drink my lot
for indigestion I'll care not.
For I would be a churlish clown
to turn all these good wishes down.
~~~
Thankyou my dear friend, applause, Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.
Edited on Jan 13 because 'Forgot full-stop.'. -
This is so very beautiful Sam. Hugh is so lucky to have such great friends. I likee the background! I know Hugh loved it. LOL The cake is delicious looking, missing about 63 candles though
I know Hugh liked that too. And the words, your usual perfection! Great poem lady for an outstanding man and poet!
Much Love,
Renee
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What an exciting, dynamic page! Loved your poem too! I'm sure that this will make Hugh's day, especially because it's from you!
<3 Maureen
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I just wish that we all could share that cake together on his backyard. This poem is beautiful and your background very gorgeous too, boy he will have a 2 meters smile when he see this.
Thank you for partying with us on his birthday Sam
Kisses and love,
Mari
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Sam -
Thank you ever so much for making in here today. As always your words are a wonderful tribute. It always amazes me how you know the right think to say for so many people here.
Thanks for adding your wishes to this birthday Bash!
Susan -
Great poem. And I ahve to agree about the cake might have to raid the fridge before bed.
Luv Mia -
Excellent!
Love the page and pome. I really like this line....
You romance us with your words,
on a gentleman level.
Gentleman Level I love it!!!!
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Dear sam, this is a wonderful Birthday wish for our Hugh, what a surprise he's going to get~Love~Joan
am tired am off to bed yawn -
This is wonderful: the poem, the graphics, and the cake looks yummy. Your words ring out of a wonderful friendship with a wonderful tribute to a great poet. Words from you rheart are always a gift because they are genuine and true so you see you already made one of your wishes for Hugh come true. ( The ryhmes there were unintential ) He has a genuine friend in you. A wonderful Birthday gift!
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