You shouldn’t have let me pretended,
I shouldn’t have let it all happen,
We shouldn’t have been so wonderful,
Cause now everything has come undone.
You shouldn’t have made me happy,
I shouldn’t have smiled at you,
We shouldn’t have even started,
Cause it was such a mistake to do.
You shouldn’t have touched me so softly,
I shouldn’t have kissed you so sweet,
We shouldn't have been so good together,
Cause now I’m alone in my defeat.
You shouldn’t have been what I wanted,
I shouldn’t have lived such a lie,
We shouldn’t have ended so badly,
Cause the only one hurting is I.
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Written January 11th, 2005
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:: pause :: wow that is...wow i dont have much to say about that its good...sad none the less but very good
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How sad life can be I love how you have written your
feelings out with pen. well done
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This is very true to my life right now. I can understand what you are going through. It isn't fun at all. I really liked the rhyme scheme and the pictures you painted with your words. You have amazing talent! Great write and good luck!
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wow this is great. wow. i love this. if you need to talk here my aim aloneinmyworld07
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*smiles* *holds momma tight*
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