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I promise

We go through everything
just the same.

And i know it sucks.
But we're not to blame.

We have to stand strong.
We'll be okay.

I promise.

It wont be long now till we
fly away from this hell.

Open our wings and just fly.
Fly with the fairy's.

Away from all this pain.
We can finally be free.

I can promise you this...
that the day is coming soon.

We will finally be free.

I PROMISE!

Author notes

Hey baby girl. this is for us. we are gunna get outta this soon.i dont think this is to good, its just some...well feelings i guess. have fun! i love ya babes!
Written January 11th, 2005

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  • hereiamhello
    February 19, 2005
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    coolness.

    Hi, this is just a random comment, saying I love it.

    it's beautiful. and I also think it has a lot of feeling.

    keep up the good write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Annie..


  • Allyson Michelle
    February 6, 2005
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    Very pretty...I love the formatting. I especially love the "flying with the fairys" bit...very imaginative and pretty. I love this, you have a great talent! The end was so perfect and beautiful. Great job!


  • Leah Rose
    February 6, 2005
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    Jessi! This has got to be one of my favorite's by you. It's so filled with hope, yet it's not gross and false hope. You're strong hun, and I know you'll get through everything in your life, and you'll come out on top. Hang in there.
    Hearts and love and peace and hugs.
    Leah

  • Shinsetsu
    February 4, 2005
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    ME likey!!!! It's great! i like it a lot!!! KEEP IT UP!!!


  • raspberry Greeters member
    January 23, 2005
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    The wordings are neatly framed ! good work..


  • TwiztedAndAlone
    January 12, 2005
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    Awww! I LOVE THIS JESSI! I know we'll get outta this mess we're in...I love you..stay strong babes. And Thanks for entering my contest!!! I'll have another one soon! hehe.

    twizted


  • AmBrO
    January 12, 2005
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    Wow...thats a great write...i really liked it!!.. Yeah i think that the end of days is comming soon but thats just because i have read the bible and stuff ya know..but anyways...this is a good write!!...keep on writing gurl...*Muchlove*AMberleigh


  • shadesofnothing
    January 11, 2005
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    hey jessi, I love it. Being free sounds like so much fun. Great write darling.
    Jenn

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