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Enraptured!

The moon lights up the room,
And illuminates the velvet bed.
We approach it ever so slowly,
And then rest on it's softness.

We stare into each other's eyes,
And you reach up to caress my face.
I revel in the scent of your skin,
And marvel even more that you're mine.

We close the gap between us,
And kiss with growing love.
I cuff your hands around the post,
And begin my leisurely journey.

My hands find their own way,
Up and down your silky body.
I pet and kiss you, my love;
Until your breath grows heavy.

Your body tantalizes me,
I can hear your heart beating;
I can even feel it behnid your breast.
I press my lips to this urgent beating.

My lips seek your taunt nipple,
And you gasp as I draw it into my mouth.
My tongue traces a line along your neck,
Where I find yet another pulse to kiss.

My fingertips enjoy your naked flesh,
As they slide up your parted thighs.
Now, I have found your fiery furnace,
And you writhe beneath my touch.

With fingers and tongues I pleasure you,
Until you scream with the ecstasy.
I unbind your hands and hold you tight,
"I love you, my beautiful girl", you say.

And I stare;

ENRAPTURED!


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A very nice dream I had.
Written January 11th, 2005

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  • josh-13
    January 26, 2005
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    wow, um arousing, ... um I mean amazing. Good write, I love the imagery. Your such a good writer. I'm impressed. ENRAPTURED!


  • January 23, 2005
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    that was an awesome write
    keep up the great work


  • Seyloren
    January 11, 2005
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    What a beautiful dream. Makes me wish I knew whether I dreamed or not. I feel so left out. I hope you find you special someone who fits into your dreams.

  • Ura Ura SISISI
    January 11, 2005
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    awesomeness

    Very beautiful poem. Great stucture and flows excellently. Keep up the great work Hope you look at some of my poems too...

    ~Tal
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