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Saying Goodbye,

Leaving imprints upon his eyes
Leaving the pain dark and inside
Broken bones that ache for happiness
It's gone and depression sets in
Moving was never an option i thought to make
Moving ? Didn't even seem to stumble over the subject
Worst happens when you least expect it
And your told to get over it

True happiness is in my heart
Leaving, saying goodbye
Rough as it is, it has to be done
Must be done !
And I'll surely miss you
Why? Why, must i leave your side
Invisible, yes! but in your heart
I scream for words to come out
Words meant for you, only you
But now it seems it's to late
It's time to say goodbye for now
And hope this chance can come true once again
My words weren't spoken
But my feelings Show deeply

Remember me, try too
Remember the tee hee's from down the hall
The giggly tone when i walked by
All the glares
And most of all my goodbye

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Written January 11th, 2005

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  • Catacomb
    February 7
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    I LOVE YOUR POEMS!! This one is my favourite thus far. Amazing write, well done!!