A gentle breeze contained me
I was still a child pronouncing love
magical beauty blinded me
I kept picking up your Jasmines
Filling me with unknown power
Pouring wine into my mouth
flooding me
simply I had no defences
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Written September 3rd, 2002
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Gentleness can have all the power of forcefulness and even sometimes more for there can be said much about the touch of both nature and the human hand...
Hugs and Happy Holidays
Eddy
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thanks Littleumpaa88
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Such a powerful poem. I love the word usage! BRAVO!
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Great poem.
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thanks mtpoet :)
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excellent
I like this poem for what is implied, as well as what is stated... -
thanks dear chasingtheday but why thursday isnt wednesday beautiful ??
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don't touch it!
mmmmm wine :) i wish it was thursday!
beautiful poem mona :) -
thanks NurseChilly
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don't touch it!
economy class is good...I loved this write Mona...~~~GILL~~~ -
thanks bonnie economy lol we need it :)
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don't touch it!
mona...you always impress me with the beautiful pictures you paint, and your economy of words...this is simply gorgeous poetry:)
~bb~
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