Kissing
touching
kissing
touching,
that's all we ever did
when our nights of passion
were novice, when we'd just discovered love.
and then you would splay your masculine fingers
in my tangled curls
and I would see the world
fall right between my feet.
Tantalizing
torture
tantalizing
torture
And then my heart would leap
at your tender touch,
and i would be caught up
in a whirlwind of paradise.
Painful
aching
painful
aching
And in a twinkling of an eye
you broke my heart
and caused the pint of faith, i had in love
to suddenly disappear.
Hurting
longing
hurting
longing,
all these memories, gone.
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Written January 11th, 2005
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..i. love. this. you did a great job
and i love the way that you worded everything....ooohhhh, and oh yah, i LOOOOVED the repeating lines, that's one of my favorite things in a poem. and the words were so sweet in the way that they were worded....great job, you write beautifully 
----Shady
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difficult to reac cause of the colour, i had to highlight it all... this reminds me of how i used to be with someone.. but it didnt last, and it all seemed to be over so quickly... but now ive found someone so special... you'll find someone new too... thank you for your comment on my poem. louise.
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Ah, those memories are never gone...you will write about it twenty years down the road when love will have crossed your path again...St Lucia? I took a Carnvale Cruise to St. Thomas a hundred years ago. thank you...amicus...
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