Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Thy Eyes Turned To Fury

Flying silently solo along this morbid path of lies

Haunting vultures swoop down to my shoulder

Waiting to tear at my insides and leave me to die

Like those birds of death, you come soaring down to burden me

Burden me of your sins and your gracious pain

That you so selfishly bestow on my every innocent whim

You are the one who turned my angelic eyes into furious pits of fire

Look at me.. A body lost in what I thought was true.

Author notes

Yes.. Another rather short one. But for some odd reason, I only get inspiration when Im talkin on AIM. Thats prolly cuz I was talkin to 2 of my best friends about some issues that Im having right now. But oh well.. New poem.
Written January 11th, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)