Black skies, cold nights, spider webs
Sleepless nights, too much fights
Manipulation, Frustration
How to end this situation
It's not that hard, i have a plan
Is it wrong
NO, its my life i can
9 floors up
I'm on the edge
Looking down as i make the pledge
Second thought creeping up on me
Leave me alone!!! Just let me be.
Face my fears, dry my eyes
Who needs a world based on lies
Calm myself, it's not that high
It's my destiny that today I die
One last breath
count till three
In a moment I'll be free.
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Written January 10th, 2005
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excellent
This is a really good poem with straight talking imagry and near perfect rhyme and rhythm and a greatly thought provoking topic thank for sharing this littlefishone
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Oh wow!!! WOW WOW!! A sombre write, yet so inviting! It is brilliantly done with a sense of calm! Somehow the theme is romantasized. I love the flow, the rythm...it is just compelling! Well done!!
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You captured the emotion of suicide so well.....great job!
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wow i really loved this, i also feel sometimes that to take the final plunge is the only way to be free. im so glad you can release your emotions so creatively, that and your work rocks! well done, lotsa love mi reflejo xx
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