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1) my doll - Midol
2) bow knee- boney
3) skin knee - skinny
4) Hi Gene - Hygiene
5) shake key - shakey
6) Can't elope  Cantaloupe
7) must herd- mustard
8) weak nest= weakness
9) fall tea -faulty
10)jump pea jumpy-

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Written January 10th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • theDARK1 gold member
    January 17, 2005
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    .if i am in here awarding you an applause, this means you did not get a trophy. it doesn't mean your in tree (entry) wasn't good enough. itz just the opposite. every entry was worthy. i will post the results moe men tare ill lee (momentarilly) and then you will see what i mean and how the win hers (winners) came about, DARK.


  • theDARK1 gold member
    January 17, 2005
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    .thank you for your con test (contest) in tree (entry). itz grate lee (greatly) ape ree she ate it (appreciated). i almost feel positive that this sim pole (simple) contest will be one of the ha r dust (hardest) to judge. i will go through every entry and then take all of them and put them two get her (together) side by side. once do in (doing) this, i will render my verdict and return with my con clue shun (conclusion). i will a ward (award) the troll fees (trophies) and will applaud the other non winning entries. i will be back in here with sum thin (something). i do thank you again for part is see pate in (participating), DARK

    btw: contest was 10,133 minutes long.


  • Samplette gold member
    January 11, 2005
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    Very nicely done. You came up with some very clever play on words..
    Sam


  • YerTweetyness
    January 10, 2005
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    I must say, That "1) my doll - Midol" had me rolling!
    Too funny!!! I enjoyed reading these words!!!
    Yertweetyness