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Pit of Emotions - In My Heart (is where you belong)

Pit of Emotions - In My Heart (is where you belong)


inspiration, motivation
but most of all... restless
lost in thoughts and talk
as I see you walk off in darkness

what is wrong with me?
as I wonder through the silent
loneliness that is my mind
hidden in deep desperation
is a closed down emotion

shivers through my spine
lost in a dreamy time..
my eyes gaze into the past
as I don't know where to look..
this feeling isn't mine...

in my heart..
I look at you once more..
yes.. you are the final score..
the last note of my song..
and in my heart...

is where you belong..

Author notes

Written on Monday 10 Januari 2004 - between 03:25 and 03:40 GMT+1 by Filip H.F. "FiXato" Slagter
Probably gonna regret writing it..
for the moment I will keep the meaning and dedication private.
Written January 10th, 2005

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  • StrandsInYourEyes
    January 18, 2005
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    never regret a chance to touch others, beautiful Fil.


  • PaulaHUGADDICT
    January 14, 2005
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    now I know..no need to hide..wont run away..i was speechless..and now Im even more..coz now I know...Itsgreat feeling to know..and s o new...I ve never knew what really ppl felt...eh.. everything is without sense what I've written...so
    Hugs you Fix very tight


  • January 14, 2005
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    Aw I love that.. Truly beautiful.
    I can relate heaps.
    Keep writing, You're awesome!
    - C


  • PaulaHUGADDICT
    January 10, 2005
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    above everything

    you're a gift...reading it out loud to Asia.. i have no words to describe.. im speechless...
    great hug :-)


  • Storybook Lie
    January 9, 2005
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    This is a really nice poem and it's kinda cool you keep the meaning and dedication private. There's just some things that you want to keep to yourself and I respect that.

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