Let the Holy Spirit rock your soul. today,
today God is making you feel brand new,
new feelings of hope and love dwell within,
within your mind, heart and soul forever,
forever God will fill you with His love,
love given to you to nurture and share,
share your love and joy God has given,
given when His son died for all your sins,
sins that were forgiven when you are reborn,
reborn through redemption and Salvation,
Salvation, a time to rejoice and give thanks.
thanks to our Lords and Savior Jesus Christ.
Christ who was nailed to a cross and crucified,
crucified for speaking the words of God,
God, creator of of all your eyes see today,
Today let the Holy Spirit rock your soul
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Written January 9th, 2005
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Thank you Ann. I always love your comments. They always leave me with a smile at the end of the day or early in the morning. God Bless you. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much pozo. I love your comments. I thought I'd try something new. God bless you mt friend. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Take care, Sandy Lf
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Thanks homie, I thought you might like it because you know how much God does rock!!! Thank you for the wonderful comment. Love ya, Sandy
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RADICAL!
Awesome amy homie! This is really cool, I like it. Like they said, I think it was really creative for you to start the next line with the last word from the previous sentence. But where did the first word come from? It would be pretty neat if the last word of the poem was the firs word of the peom, sounds kinda hard huh? Anyway, nice write, very incouraging! -
Sandy, I love this type of poetry where the last word is the beginning of the next line, it only "adds" to the magnificant beauty of this piece my friend, your inspiration "always" bring a lift to my day! Ann >
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THis is a really great poem. Ilove how the last word at every sentance is the first word of the new sentacne. This is a great effect. Awesome job. Plus the truth that this poem holds is great as well. This is awesome. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work. Hope to read more soon.
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Great poem which I liked a lot, this was deep and wonderfully written. I like the style, the way that you started with the last word from the previous line
Hey, I was browsing through spiritual and your poem came up- cool huh? I thought you were someone else, your freeverse is as good as your rhyme
God bless, this was a lovely poem
All the best,
Pozo
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