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Overwhelming Silence

Sinking in thoughts in my mind
Who am I to Blame?
Silence overwhelms my ears
Yet loudness does the same
Who are you to preach to me
How i should live or die
When none of you were ever there to hold me when id cry

Chorus:
And now i see the rain falling again
I see the misery come crashing in
I tear my heart apart for you
And all the pain you put me through

Words can cut like razors if you speak them just right
Tear the flesh right from your bones like a vulture in the night
But what makes you so justified in sayin shit so cruel
When in the end you're the only one lookin like the fool

Chorus:
And now i hear the pain calling again
I feel the blood in my eyes come pouring in
I put my heart on the line for you
But you were everything to me but true

(Guitar solo)

Chorus:
And now i see the rain falling again
I see my world come crashing in
I tore my soul and life apart for you
But I've had enough of this and now I'm through

NOW I'M THROUGH
NOW I'M THROUGH
I TEAR MYSELF APART

Author notes

Last choice: song lyrics

Song i wrote about someone that meant alot to me and said some pretty cruel things
Written January 9th, 2005

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    May 21, 2005
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    Awesome lyrics, Making it very hard to judge this contest. I like this. Thanx for entering and good luck in the contest.
  • XXLoNeLyPoEtXx
    February 23, 2005
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    wow, great lyrics, i really liked how it flowed. good luck
  • Michael 54
    February 23, 2005
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    Very Good

    Nice work on the lyrics. A good rythym and rhyme to this piece. Good luck in the contest. Take care.

    Michael

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 9, 2005
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    I really like the rythym and the flow in this song. I can see it being some kind of hard rock/metal type and I really like the message here. It is exactly how I feel at this moment. It's so true. Words can cut like razors and I absolutely love that line. You did a really great job. Keep writing.
  • Sita
    January 9, 2005
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    i love it
    ~Sita
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