a child coos in delight
mother's hands bring her magic
childhood is transformed
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Written September 2nd, 2002
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a most excellent Senyru
memories
made from simple things
change life forever
grin
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Ah the power of love. In three lines you manage to capture the pure essence of the love between mother and child; though enough books to fill the planet could be written about it you've said it all here in a nutshell.
Love & peace
Georgia
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Ooooo! I looove this background!
The poem is great too. Haiku?
Great job Susan!
What on Earth is a Senryus?
~Sarah
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So sweet!
Wow! What a beautiful and sweet feeling you have summed up here in 3 lines. This made me ooh and aah in delight. The repetition of the 'c' sound in L1 was lovely.
I dont have kids, but oh well, when they do come, it's going to be the best day of my life
Hugs,
Charishma
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Its a wonderful feeling and so fun to watch your child fingerpaint. I let my daughter paint with water colors earlier, the first time she has ever done that. Her artwork is hanging on my fridge, splashes of mixed paint hasnever looked so beautiful!
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awwwwwwww
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very warm and sweet.
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I forgot to ask is that a picture of you and yours, it is so sweet and you can feel the love. -
don't touch it!
dear sweet sis, this warms this mom heart, makes me want to get down and fingerpaint too. I love you and I see I have alot of read to do here. -
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*Sigh* Beautiful picture, and of cours the poem was right on point. It's too bad that more parents don't spend time with their children like this. I have to ask, please tell me, were you inspired to write the poem by the picture, or did you find or create the picture after you wrote the poem? Just curious.... -
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cute
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don't touch it!
another cool photo. good work. -
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aww!! cute picture...
lovely haiku*
thanx so much for sharing!!! -
don't touch it!
childhood transformed.......... a mother's job...... a child's blessing.....................
Monk -
excellent
The feeling shared between the innocent, dependant, child and parent. Unforgettable even in DECADES to come truly. Beautiful -tj- -
don't touch it!
This brought back some lovely messy memories.
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excellent
Very sweet write.
Meg -
don't touch it!
aahhh the dreaded fingerpaints...all up the walls on the furniture...but what joy!!! a lovely poem hon...liked it alot...~~~GILL~~ -
Oh thank you Joyce your comment appreciated.....:)
Blessings
Susan~~~
Edited by Blushfulmoon on right now because 'error~~~'. -
excellent
:~) This is so sweet and warm! It does transform children when they learn they can create.
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