Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

The Tone In Her Voice

Missing image


The tone in her voice told me I had gone too far,
the tear down her cheek another scar
inflicted upon an already bruised loving heart.

 

 

The look in her eyes cause me to shudder,
the clench of her jaw stimulates a twitch of her lip,
to quell and dissipate words she would love to spew,
but will not,
instead, scream into deep recesses of her brain.

 

 

The stoop of her shoulders, hands balled into fists' drill into her waist
with legs spread taunt,
all positive signs to find an escape route.

As I turn and crawl away I hear her say,
if you were not a baby, there would be the devil to pay.

 

 

There was nothing I could say,
at nine months,
language was scheduled for another day,
so I just went about my way,
next time I see mom, she will give me a hug, everything again okay.

 

 

Until the next time.

Author notes

Option 4

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • This is lovely. I was confused at first because many women are quite like this when giving birth, but babies do often make moms mad for some reason or another.
    Great poem and good luck


  • PowerOfLove
    January 11, 2005
    Edit | Reply

    Magnificent Imagery

    Your imagery was magnificent as usual Mac. Isn't it amazing how an innocent child can be the focus of so much anger when it is the mother's own frustration, unfulfillment and discontentment that is the root source. And the mother's projection on to the child, leaves the child with the "blame and shame" of having done something supposedly wrong. Well written and depicted as usual. Thank you, take care, Heather

  • Sweet Briar
    January 8, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Should I laugh
    should I cry
    the answer lies
    until the end

    also you forgot to add something in the comment box
    and thank you for entering