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White Horses (a Riddle for Barbara)

We've been called White Horses
And unpredictable forces.
Made by heat, sound, light, and arcs,
Moving with the Moon, air, and sharks.
Made by your hands as well as the sea
We are the motion that sets some free.

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Written January 8th, 2005

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  • David Houston
    May 26, 2006
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    Thanks "Neph," your comments are always appreciated. Your applauses are also well-taken. Best to you and yours always. With regards of course.


  • Nephlim
    May 26, 2006
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    Short, but this has a subtle beauty to it in it's rhythm, I think I know the answer . Great job

  • David Houston
    February 26, 2005
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    Congrats to you, slender spider. very nicely done, and thanks for the comment. Best Regards, ME


  • slender spider
    February 26, 2005
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    Oh this is a great poem, I think I know the answer simply because I to watch these white horses whenever I can myself. I'm going to try to figure this IM thingy out and see if I'm right.


  • Huntress silver member
    January 9, 2005
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    Hey thanks, queen is pretty cool too.

  • David Houston
    January 9, 2005
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    Hey Queen, you are the second to solve! Thanks for your diligence and i knew a "pirate-babe" like you would get this.

  • David Houston
    January 9, 2005
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    Huntress has solved first and who will be next? The new format is to guess or respond by I.M. and this is better because it gives more opportunities to all. Peace, and thanks Huntress for your astute reasoning! Best Regards, David
    Edited on May 04, 10:45 p.m. because 'nevermind, "NOYB"'.


  • queen Moderators member
    January 9, 2005
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    I know what it is i think

  • David Houston
    January 9, 2005
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    For the record, Amazon did not have the right answer listed in her guesses. Peace

  • David Houston
    January 8, 2005
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    Amazon, you are close, but could you I.M. me with your answer. This allows people to not accidently see the correct answer. Thanks and Best wishes


  • Amazon
    January 8, 2005
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    Is it a gale or wind or tide?

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