baby, i was been forward for you...
all i say is that;
"put that star back, you don't fucking deserve it."
you think you can just pick the stars from the sky?
you cant, you have to wish and hope it shoot you through the chest.
if it doesn't i hope your happy as the Christmas card drawing implies.
"I'm a safe bed, and your four second foreplay". is a reply to your drunken hands.
so you were left out of romeo and Juliet, left out of the teams at school.
just stop screaming, its so complicated...
your driving me to the edge of this romance in a vintage pink Cadillac and I'm driving us to the edge of town to stare at the stars. but still you vomit on the leather interior, something to remember you by.
you bring the lighter fluid and ill bring the lighter.
we will burn the newspapers that headline the fall of the sky, fall of a leader to a free fall bullet.
i hear a acoustic backdrop, footsteps through the rain.
"put that star back... you don't fucking deserve it"
i was that star and baby you deserve better than this.
so ill read the context, look at my best friends.
your like a second nature to me... a six sense that tells me each constellation as it draws from the suns charcoal shading, like the pictures of a 5 year old so simple yet sentimental.
darling i love pink, i really do... but red was made to clash.
baby... your not speaking... did you get your wish?
were you sniper-ed down like Kennedy, killed before your lover like romeo?
well...
there's only Marylin Monroe left now, we have swapped roles as the characters of a so called sexual role play.
sorry i couldn't drive you back, red clashes with pink...
and roadkill is so 1950's
lets blame the rain on love.
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Written January 8th, 2005
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You rule Danny. Its my fave poem. it rules.
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im his mate and he fucking rulkes and is so emo, cheer up emo kid.
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this is fukcing amazing, i cannot believe you cnosidered not putting it up on here, it rules! well done to you babe! xXx
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AMAZING!
Yeh you also know i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem. . . its so good!Its amazing and you are an amazing poet aswell as an amazing person
keep writing the exact way you do now! bye bye xXx
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This is an amazing poem, i love it.
"your driving me to the edge of this romance in a vintage pink Cadillac and I'm driving us to the edge of town to stare at the stars"
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Love it
You know i love this poem, . . Love may be an understatement, this really is one amazing piece. I love the reference to the stars.
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