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Randomness

I know eggs will rule the world
And that little boys and girls,
Is a lesson you must learn
For Usher has a song called Burn.
The ladies think he's hot
But I think he is not.

Now I know dogs drool,
And pigs go to school,
And there's no oxygen in air,
AHHHHHH Its a bear!!!!!

I know I forced rhymed.
I do it all the time.
But now we've reached the end,
So farewell to you my friend.

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I was extremely bored when I wrote this...do not ask
Written January 7th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Poemwriter
    January 30, 2005
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    I don't like eggs either but thats my theory along with cows ruling the world.


  • Awnoewa
    January 30, 2005
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    Well, that was interesting. I hope eggs don't rule the world. I don't like them very much. You're poem doesn't make much sence, but who said it has too? Thanks for entering my contest, Angie

  • Poemwriter
    January 9, 2005
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    Thanks for commenting! It really isn't supposed to make sense but I liked the idea of having a random poem!


  • Taur-amandil silver member
    January 8, 2005
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    Haha! Been there! I think I have an entire journal of poems that could be friends with this one! I actually liked it, though. It doesn't make much sense, and I'm sure it's not suppossed to, but there is so much going on and it's really fast paced. I like it.