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Delicate

Your beautifully small body
your soft skin,
you are my daughter...
only 3 weeks of age.
You look so fragile,
so delicate, so easy to break.

I made a mistake,
nine months ago...
but the outcome of this mistake
is not a mistake at all.
You are my little girl,
my heart, my soul.

I love you Blair.

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Written January 7th, 2005

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  • macandrew
    December 18, 2005
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    I liked the thought of this one. A bit rough in spots but good potential.

    Well written
    John

  • Queen Maab
    April 29, 2005
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    Hi Blair. Both of my children were pill failures and the best mistakes I've made in my entire life. I'm so happy for you, it's quite a job, being a mommy, but the payoff in the end is worth every stinkin' minute.
    Maab


  • IrrefutableBliss
    February 24, 2005
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    Heh say hi to blair for me!