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You

I silently stare out the window,
And think about you there.
You are now but a shadow,
That once was a light.

We shared a love,
So rare in this vile world.
Then suddenly you left,
And a chain fell around my heart.

Now you have someone else,
And I am left alone.
My soul is now a cold, dank cellar;
My life a desolate country road.

When we were together,
And you said you loved me;
I felt like I could fly.
But now I have no wings.

My world has gone dark,
With no more vibrant colors.
I can see the black abyss;
It is waiting for me.

I have not yet accepted,
The loss of your love.
But once I do,
It will swallow me whole.

Life has no point anymore.
No direction for me to follow.
There is no reason;
I am just waiting for death.

I would give my soul,
Just to hold you once again.
I would give my life,
Just to kiss your lips.

How many times have I dreamed of you?
How long must I suffer?
When will you disappear?
Will your memory never die?

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This was from my other account as well.
Written April 13th, 2004

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  • Sir Shay
    April 23, 2005
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    Again - if I was just a little bit less over Michael, I'd be in tears right now. I'm close enough as is.

    "How many times have I dreamed of you?
    How long must I suffer?
    When will you disappear?
    Will your memory never die?"

    ♥ ~Stormy~ ♥