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I know I love you,
And I thought you loved me.
You certainly said it,
Whenever we were alone.

But no,
We can't be.
Because you can't hack it.
You little weakling.

I let you go in peace,
Because you said you would return.
But now you say there is another,
And you two are expecting a little one.

I hope the baby brings you pain,
And I hope your lover leaves you cold.
I hope you rot inside yourself,
For forsaking me in love.

If you should come here,
And plead with me to take you back.
I would laugh in your face,
And slowly turn and walk away.

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This was a poem I had on my other account and I thought I should put those poems on this account as well so that all of them would be together.
Written April 13th, 2004

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  • rejected xox love
    August 15, 2006
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    this was really great! I'm sorry this happened to you. but the emotions were awesome!
    good luck in the contest & keep up the wonderful work!
    -rejected-


  • Sir Shay
    April 23, 2005
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    Powerful

    Cheaters should all be shot. Well, maybe not shot - just put in the stocks and laughed at like they did in the Puritan days. I'm sure there'd be less of them if we still punished people for that. I've been in this situation too - he got another girl pregnant - and I hadn't even known until he showed up with her, 8 moths pregnant, on our doorstep Halloween night, asking to go trick-or-treating with us for his last year as a 'kid.' Now he's got 4 kids with her. And my hate over the situation has abated, long since, but still. It always hurts.

    ♥ ~Stormy~ ♥


  • TwistedBloodyLilly silver member
    January 10, 2005
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    Thanks for the comment. I am sorry this had to happen to you too. She did come back as a matter of fact. He was beating her and she came back pregnant expecting me to take her and the baby back. No chance in hell. You cheat on me you're out the door. Thank you so much for reading my poetry. *Hugs* ~Joy~

  • BlueEyesCrying
    January 7, 2005
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    *Reads over and over* I know the feeling. It happen to me as well. I was cheated on and he now having a child with her. I applaud you for writing this so strong and with just great words. I love this../

    "I hope the baby brings you pain,
    And I hope your lover leaves you cold.
    I hope you rot inside yourself,
    For forsaking me in love.

    If you should come here,
    And plead with me to take you back.
    I would laugh in your face,
    And slowly turn and walk away."

    Keep it up that way. Stang yoour ground and you will be a better person for it. *Hugs*