"I love you baby..."
What kind of love is this?
Is your love even true?
Why do you lie to me?
Do you even care?
I can see it all in your eyes...
the fakeness which makes me blind.
Why do you want to hurt me?
You say you love me...
but why do I see your lies.
I love you...
I really do.
I never want to hurt you,
but what you do and say sometimes,
just makes me slowly bleed my inside away.
Is this how it’s supposed to be?
If love was so painful...then why would people fall for it?
Your love and you are so fake,
that all I want is to stay away.
Its just too sad that you cant see...
because the love that you have for me...
is nothing like what it’s actually suppose to be.
Author notes
Ok this poem is not a personal poem..it has nothing to do with me. i jus wrote it and like the questions jus came..lol and yeah...so the poem jus came...i dunno its not like a nice poem...but i dunno i cant write poetry...lol
Written January 7th, 2005
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clicked this cuz of the title...curious about the 7 questions, sounds like a rant and the self-analysis which you said was made up shows that you tend to rationalize...nice piece altogether..and thanks for visiting my site..peter
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Well, I can certainly empathise with your poem, even if it isn't about you. Having doubts such as these is a natural part of relationship...unfortunately. The strength in a relationship is being able to survive it.
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SUCKERRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!! i finally got internet connection! oh yeahhhhhhhhhhh! and its like so faster than saudi. im like AMAZED. woah, and like WOAH. i miss u so much u buttttttt.
screw you..l had my first day of skool today and it like sucks. the kids are nice and all but im so lost and i dont know anybody and everybody seems so fudding boring and shiznots. ugh. bwegh., yeuch. and i dont wanna go to school tommorow and fude mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn, life sucks major a$$... damn like i miss u guys. well im forwarding this to maria and iman and nelum like yeah..its 10 o clock already and i didnt finish my homework and yeah...things suck. and the weather is really bad here and its so coooolld. and it snowed her for about 10 minutes....and ermmmmmm...90% of the people here are european or american and eurghhhh. kill me dudeeeeeeeeeee.anyways i hope tommmor will be bettter. im so sleepy. ugh.and uhm, yeah.... so i guess ill come back tommorow.,..k?? tooooooooooodles.good nite and au revoirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. and wish me luck. on. erm. everthing. 
love yeah. keep in touch RAOWR!. oh yeah now that the raowr thing came up, now I'm losing it! im losing the power of the holy RAOWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR. 
well i love you and rot in hell! i mean rock on. love yahhh..by the way neelums ugly UGLY background loox like beyonce..no wonder it was ugly. hahaha. okay beyonce isnt ugly but shes a hore. 
lov yea
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I can relate to this poem. I like this one. I agree with the line, "If love is so painful.... then why would people fall for it.?" That is a question that will never be answered. great write.
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haha retard..lol it was a good movie...well im happy u had fun...EATING ...lol at lesat i got to see ub4 u left...woohoo
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hahah maria u butthole! you only post lovey dovey poems!! and what is up with that kinky background??????????????
you and shaggy go better than that stupid arse dino.! oh yeah. and about the poem, good job! Im applauding like *clap clap* hehehe. well im gonn miss u u buttttttttttttttttt. oh yeah, and thanks for the pizza yesterday... muahaha. and the choco chip cookies, the gushers, the...porn lol hahaha. well lov yaaaaaaaaa. and keep rocking
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WOOHOO...WE CAN ALL KIK ASS TOGETHER U GUYZ..HAHA..lol ..but lets not hurt him ok..lol neelum's nice way ..roawr..lol...kidding...but he didn't do anythin gu guyz...i jus wrote the poem for fun!!
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you butt! thats good cuz if barney hurt you id kick his butt! NOT NICLEY! i still like the perfect one better but this ones good too HEY MINDU WROTE BOUT KICKING HIS BUTT TOO! ME AND MINDU TOGETHER, WILL KICK ALL BUTTS THAT HURT THE GANGNESS...ness.....ness....you know i have this weird fetish of saying ness.....it sounds good lol aight ill shut up now
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haha mandy..lol luv u
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Yay I'm glad you say it's not ture, but it's good, more like a letter than a poem, but still poetic, and all that stuff hehe. Ya it's really good, I'm glad its not real, though if anyone WERE to hurt you, even if it be a certain giant purple dinosaur, I'd kick their ass, somehow. But this is good, and good questions to ask about things.
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maria, i think that this is one of your best poesm.....seirously......you did a great job, u knoe, u really should keep writing...u keep getting better and better each time you post something up.....GRRRRRRREAT JOB! (hehe tony the tiger, they're grrrrreat!) haha srry i knoe that was random, but ya, u keep gettin better and i would applaud but i'm all out, so yeah, GRRRRRRREAT JOB! ill come back later to applaud
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