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A Whole New World

Opening my eyes and now I see.
The possibilities are endless for me.
My future is brighter,
my world is a glow,
I will take these blessings and make sure my children forever know,
I (we) am walking a new path with my hands up
as I wave,
THANK YOU JESUS for this life
YOU saved.
I thought I knew love...
boy was I mistaken!
My heart, my mind, my soul,
are now awakened.
Unlock, release, and expose
your old deeds,
your Father is here,
He is the one, who fulfills all your desires,
truth, faith, prayer and devotion
is all He requires.
For those who don't believe,
for those who are lost,
I pray your life you lose
Lord knows
if you lose you win
a lifetime with Him.

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Written January 6th, 2005

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  • FallenxAngelxMisfit
    March 2, 2007

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    this is a really really good one, it spoke to me sorta thing but i really really love it keep up the great work i really liked Opening my eyes and now I see.
    The possibilities are endless for me.
    My future is brighter,
    my world is a glow,
    I will take these blessings and make sure my children forever know,
    I (we) am walking a new path with my hands up
    as I wave,
    it was the best part ever good work


  • Vickie J
    January 14, 2005
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    Oh... this is such a great testimonial type poem. Excellently written, full of the truth! vickie

  • Rainbow56
    January 7, 2005
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    Powerful

    All I can say is that this a very powerful write


  • Crystal
    January 6, 2005
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    Hey tanks... It is nice to have something up on my page that is other than painful or venting.
    Tanks so much for the comment
    crystal

  • shanax9
    January 6, 2005
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    Very uplifting

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