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Knowing I shouldn't...

My heart takes a leap
Every time I see you
Some time I hope to keep
The reason that I love you

Locked up inside
But you're forcing it out
You're not even trying to rip me of my pride
But I keep losing my doubt

Do you really love me?
Or did you even ever?
But I keep trying to be
what you ask for in forever

My heart takes a leap
Every time you kiss me
Some time I hope to keep
Believing we could be

I forgot what spell to cast
And you ignore my tries
You hurt me so much in the past
And now she helps your defies

Who is she?
This girl you love more than you seemed to ever love me
Who is she?
This girl I want to be

When she told you not to
You came running back to me
So why can I still not deny you?
I still didn't realize that we'll never be....

How can I be so stupid?

Author notes

I can't deny this guy anything. I love him more than I even know. No matter how much shit he does to me, I just seem to let him. It's really annoying me, because I realize it when he's not around, but once he's in front of me, I want to kiss him, and hug him, and support him in any way I can....
I HATE IT!!!
Written January 6th, 2005

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  • ASenseofTragedy
    January 22, 2005
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    EXCELLENT JOB! i loved this poem. its exactly how i felt with my ex. but i let him go, once sat down with my friends and talked to them. after that, i found someone else, someone who loved me for me, who paid attention. i know its hard, but u have to stop people from taking advantage of u. u did an excellent job. i can totally relate to this poem. i hope u figure this out. ur an excellent writer. this is one of the best. good luck and thanks for entering.