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Sun

The setting sun—shimmering beauty
Rays of gold washing into purple moors
Placid lakes moving from blue to ablaze with red and fade out into dark ebony
The harked and herald resplendently of the multi-colored sky
Striking into the hearts through every human’s eyes.

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Written January 5th, 2005

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