No more will we be able to stroll by the river
sit on the grass watching the waterfall cascade.
Our dreams have been shattered, torn apart!
The walks in the park arm in arm, holding hands
laughing, running like teenagers playing.
The rides on your motor bike, holding you close
racing with the wind, enjoying the thrill.
meeting one day was our biggest dream.
my love for you will never change
I gave you my heart, it was given with love.
You say you love me, want to be by my side
vowed we would never part.
what we have is not enough to keep our love!
there has to be communication,
if you cannot give me that, then we must part.
we are connected, that will never change,
I will always hold you close to me.
Will never stop loving you.
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Just a dream
Written January 5th, 2005
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Very beautifuly written filled with love and emotion..
nice..
by Knight
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Hey Dan, I ran into my mechanic(on foot, not into his car
) I asked him, hehehe, he says he will think about taking me on his bike! he's not gonna get out of it 
Jenn
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Hey Dan,Maybe you can always make that trip to Australia and we can whizz around Sydney on a motor bike you seem to have had a few spills though..hmmmm a ZORO scar
AWWW you will find someone, guaranteed I haven't ridden on a motor bike since I was 16 OMG but it would be a big thrill, my mechanic is always offering to take me for a drive on his bike. but he is just stirring me..hmmm will have to ask him when I see him next time..put him on the spot Jen 
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hmmm...gotta watch out for those motorcycles! I should have died in at least two really good crashes on them. I suppose I just like to go too fast when I'm riding. At least I got a really cool "mark of Zorro" scar across my chest from one of my last motorcycle wrecks! An old guy in a station turned in front of me and I nailed him doing about 70 miles per hour. That was QUITE a ride.
I suppose motorcycles can be dangerous almost any way you look at them. Even if all you do is lose your heart on one.
I haven't had a girlfriend in quite a while ... mabe it's time for another motorcycle. Hell...you gotta have at least one wild ride going on in life!
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thank you YPL, yes it does hurt doesn't it, and WoW both have motor bikes, I am hoping he comes back as he had done before. love jennifer
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An Excellent Job!
Jennifer,such a heartfelt poem really..i feel each word you said in this piece...as i can relate to it somehow..i read some of your other poems here..i knew that you maybe talking about someone special you met online..i know how hard this is..actually i am going through same situation ..it just seem ,it doesn't work that way..when there is no communication..things start fading..it is hard to get things back to its place..(by the way ,my special someone got motorbike too..isn't aMazing..how much simillarities..we have..even in our feelings...) hope everything will be ok..
your freind YPL
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Great heart felt poem
Such a wonderful poem. Writtem for such a wonderful heart. Communication is such an important part of love. It also plays such an important part when the two people are appart. How can one know how their feels if they do not tell you. If communication fails and canot be restored the foundation of true love will fall appart. Your poem is filled with such emotion and heart. I Hope and pray that everything works out. -
A dream? Sounds like a nightmare. When two people don't communicate....it's a nightmare. I lived it. I tried to communicate, and in my own way I did. But my wife didn't think I did. Or maybe I didn't in the way she wanted me to. Anyway, great poem which is much closer to real than a dream. ~Bud~
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