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Mr.Right

You search and search
for that special someone

And just when you find them
There's another person hogging all the fun

The fun you could be having
If that one "fun hogger" weren't still in your life

He's always there asking weird questions
As if to cause you strife

"Do you like 'so and so'?"
"Would you dump me for another guy?"

All of these question cause you to ask another
"Ummm...No of coarse not honey, why?"

When you would really like to say,
"The truth is i do like 'so and so'and i would dump you for him."

"You know why honey?"

He's my Mr.Right
He likes the things i do

He's nice and is REALLY funny
and someone i can talk to

I'd share my life with my Mr.Right
and i know you want to know who he is

Well im not telling
So you'll just have to take a wild guess





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Written January 5th, 2005

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  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    March 25, 2005
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    Hmm, interesting. I really do not know what else to say about this. Except that yes, Mister Right is indeed out there somewhere for all of us. I've found mine, and I wish you luck in finding yours.

  • cannilickureye
    March 7, 2005
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    Not ur best, but still good. Aaron's a jerk, and I will saw that gurl's nose down with a nail file.


  • wbiro gold member
    January 5, 2005
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    This is great but it doesn't follow the rules... there must be a more profound reason you've submitted this here...