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Sacrifice

My thoughts engraved your mind
A lie is not a reflection
The truth with many appearances
Your face all I can see
The question of relationship is a stroke
An arrow through the heart
Wait the nights of the hollow demands
You were meant to be
But just not mine

Author notes

Love could be sacrifice
Written January 5th, 2005

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