I 'm not your misconception,
M y lovely, and I want you to
N ever notice the
O pening of hatred slowly breathe through
T he final curtain call...
Y ou bring the world to an end and I stagger
O ver and over again because YOU
U ndermined eternity, eternity and
R eality, with your faithless truths.
M istress of the day,
I never can imagine your
S omber silence until you
C ome closer and I realize, yet again, my
O btrusive hate -
N ight sings through the
C learly framed
E xit - I don't need to
P eer around to know that
T here is nothing more than
I nsane mislove
O r just the
N ight-song of the sun...
Author notes
i've never done an acrostic before... i tried once but found it too hard... or that i was just too lazy. xp. im still really lazy, and i did find it kind of difficult, but... it's not as hard as trying to write my freaking essay for the application for this school for the arts. >_>
Written January 5th, 2005
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This was pretty cool. Ive never done one of these kind of poems...but you inspired me
...lol. I need to branch out in my poetry. Well back to the write. It was well written and great for your first acrostic. Keep it up!
~jenn~ -
oooh i get it i think they were talked about in some book a read.. Kerosene... or something. and hehe thanks ^^
~taori -
wow im glad you tried again this is really good! school of the arts? hope you get in!!! oh and a charv is a stereotypical person here in britain, you might have seen on tv, tracksuit bottoms, trainers, say "ere mush", get into trouble, smoke, drink, do drugs, and the girls!! well, too much make up, very short skirts, pregnant at 13 divorced at 17 etc!! lol!! anyways, well done, charli xx
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