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Sinking

on an all time high
woah wahay yay
spinning mind
life's a sunny day
then something small comes along
messes with the balance
pushes it over the edge
and boom
woah wahay yay no more
sinking into darkness
speeding away from smiles
drifting through sorrow
for miles and miles
wishing for nothing
caring for nothing
hoping for nothing
or something
but it doesnt seem to matter
nothing matters
nothing

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Written January 5th, 2005

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