This was written to a friend of mine who I haven't seen in a very long time... She was very motherly to everyone and everyone loved her.
Sitting all alone
Tears roll down my face
By the fire shown
To this lonely place
You dried my tears
As I'd cry out
You calmed my fears
Before I'd shout
I miss you
Please hear me out
I love you
Without a doubt
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Written November 15th, 2005
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astonishing work
short and to the point. very hard to make a clear point in that few of lines , very well done. -
Aw, that's really cute and sweet, although it's short it's really good
Great poem, most of your's are, see you tomorrow at school
~Tins <3 -
I like this one, it's short but very nice and well thought out! Great job, keep it up
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Short and sweet
Really nice too.. I think either this is all there is to say, or there's a lot more in this. Personally, I think you have more to say, and I want to hear it.
The poem is very simple, which to me is refreshing, because everybody is always trying to be so complex and mysterious.
Thank you for a good read, and keep it up!
Love, MJ
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