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Lyrics of Love

I wrote this when someone told me they loved me then changed their mind... this was what I was feeling after that happened.


I think of how I love you
As my empty door creaks
I think of how I love you
As my empty heart breaks

Swirls of nothing
Wisping around me
Swirls of nothing
Slowly surround me

My heart is empty
Give me love
My heart is empty
Spill your blood

Add wood
The fire's dying
Add-lib
Lyrics of love

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Written November 10th, 2005

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  • ItsUrHomeboy
    March 10, 2008

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    wonderful

    very heart felt writing, were not for love would no hearts break. great imagery as well , great piece

  • Vampyric Lust
    January 5, 2005
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    man i know how that feels...heh my ex was cheating on me for the whole 2 months we were going out and a bunch of shit i dont even know...im so sorry for you...