Time would reveal…
Someday, in any way
Close your eyes for now
Think of me, you’ll see
A smile from above…
Hearts could talk…
We knew it, as always
Believe me, you’re the one
Think of me, you’ll see
A smile from above…
Our love shall find…
A way for tomorrow
For I never stop hoping
Think of me, you’ll see
A smile from above…
We’ll be together…
Not at this moment
Yet I remain, forever
Think of me, you’ll see
A smile from above…
You will understand…
Why I left you down there
Even if it really hurt
Think of me, you’ll see
A smile from above…
My love, in due time…
You’ll be up here with me
Think of me and our love
You’ll see why there is
A smile from above…
Author notes
when all you need is to face the TRUTH!!!
when all you need is to accept REALITY!!!
God, it's killing me softly...
Written January 4th, 2005
A contest entry
- Pre-writes and Fresh Writes Contest by FloridaGatorQueen.
525 points, ended November 15, 2008, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a very sweet poem. I do believe in heaven. I just don't believe I will go there when I die. I believe in a paradise earth. That is just me though. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.
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loved the structure, not sure it needs the repetition but it all adds toyour poem,. and i wasnt looking for the choice of words just the emotion, and your poem if full of it... good luck ~arcana~
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Wonderful Vent
A sad poem. Love is a risk we take willingly knowing there are lots of thorns. No relationship is a bed of roses, it has its ups and downs. Yes, we have to accept the reality not hope for what "should be"
Though sad very well expressed.
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A touching and heartfelt poem. I can relate to your words and they are so true. It is we who are left who are in pain, they are smiling and so good to remember that. A soft and tender poem. Thank you for sharing it. blessing and hope, sharon
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this is a very great piece,i love it....keep it up!!!you could stop by and read some of mine.there ok!
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WOW!!! i really liked how you repeated: Think of me, you’ll see
A smile from above…
and then you changed it in the last stanza! great write! very powerful! keep it up! -
I know exactly what you are going through, being in love, and through death or less tragic motives, your love is taken away from you, and you are left to keep them in your thoughts and dreams, and leave them with "A smile from above"
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very good
I could use a smile from above every day. So your love is quite lucky indeed to have such a lovely sentiment expressed poetically.
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This was a different write. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't the best I've ever read.
Nice job on it though. It flowed fairly well.
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Very moving and beautiful work....T
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excellent!
this without a doubt was beautiful in every way, shape and form....you couldn't have done any better! It was touching and raw yet honest and uplifting...the sad undertones were outshined in a way where it wasn't goodbye forever, but simply till we meet again...bravo, bravo, bravo!!!
Ate 'Mo'
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this is totally admirable
a beautiful prayer like it's almost coming true becuase your conviction are so strong...
in this it's the impossible is almost becoming possible
the surreal is about the to be real
Anna Lee
at ito na naman ako ginagasgas ang 2 salitang boborito ko (real and surreal, hehe) -
this is so sweet..take a look of my poem think of me..same idea of urs..great job..keep penning..
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this is beautiful. Truely. Did someone you are close to pass away? Its hard.. extremly, it is. but it is possible, it takes a long time, anywho, you did a wonderful job on this. blessed be.
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i can so relate to the way you feel in this poem but me eing me i would have expressed it in anger.....instead of beauty..........well done!
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Beautiful is certainly the first word that comes to mind while reading this. Sad is closely behind it and it just tugs at you heart as the words are consumed. A very lovely poem.
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I think this is Beautiful. You're very good with putting your emotions into words. I look forward to reading more by you..
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i know how you're feeling right now...there's nothing like losing someone you love, there's no real way to describe it, but i think you've come pretty darn close. this is a beautiful poem, and a beautiful tribute...i'm sorry that you have to feel this pain.
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What a beautiful poem. So sad and haunting. You really know how to express your emotions in a way that grabs the reader and pulls them in.
Anna
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