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For Mr. Smith

The Dawn will always rise again

Revealing another morn'.

The Light will always cheer you up

Not leaving you to mourn.


The Dusk will always settle in

Preparing for the night.

And you'll wake up to another, more beautiful morn'

Revealing brand new Light.

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This is a poem I wrote for the family of a teacher who died recently. Please comment!
Written January 3rd, 2005

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  • My unshed tears
    January 6, 2005
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    I think it is a beautiful piece, with a true sense of hope... everyone needs light amongst dark times! great job!